This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Monday, 12 December 2016
Monday, 5 December 2016
Wednesday, 23 November 2016
Monday, 21 November 2016
Wednesday, 19 October 2016
Test demo
One day i was in my boat far away and then I saw a mysterious cave looking tunnel thing Hmmm. I was going to go in but nah. Bye the ways my boat was called betty and my name was Jack and i'm 21 years old.
I was heading home after a BIG day then I got all my gare to fish but I wanted to explore the Dangerous tunnel i went in and was shaking and I gulped I went in and saw a giant spider with BIG RED eyes looking at me at me. I had goosebumps I froze and had a high pitched squeal EEEEEEEEE.
I heard the “police” they said oh no someone went in the tunnel of. I didn't hear the rest I was too scared the spider was going to eat me. I ran but did he say the tunnel of terror or the tunnel of horror or (gulp) the tunnel of D e a t h I ran back but the police blocked it off I saw light I went to it and I got out I said Yay.
I didn’t die the police looked at me and said you are under arrest for breaking into the tunnel of fun And yea “I” said i didn’t know i've never seen this place before. “Police” kid you could of died in there it's under construction. I didn’t know and also you had to put gates up and signs so you can't arrest me (in a cheeky voice)
The “police” said ok ok om you got me.
“Jack” Then why was there a big scary spider.
“Police” They are lights the eyes are lights
“Jack” Ohhhhh
I went home end told my mum and dad the whole story Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla and that was a time they would remember.
Friday, 14 October 2016
THE BEST PART OF THE PES OLYIMPICS
I woke up at 6:30 AM for this time and I finally came. The sun was out it was a sunny hot day. Then me and my brother caught the bus went to school and we were all getting our country. I was in (drum roll please) Ireland A And we lost 3 games and won the rest. We came 4th south Africa came 3rd and Brazil 2nd and Fiji came 1st. It was really fun. They made The Olympics rings with plates. And we sat down with them and we all stood up and held our plate on our head. with a drone way up in the sky videoing us and it looked cool. And when I got home I was sore and exhausted.
(TRUE STORY)
(TRUE STORY)
Tuesday, 11 October 2016
Monday, 10 October 2016
Thursday, 22 September 2016
BUSH Narrative Revised
T: Title
O: Orientation( when where who what why )
P: Problem
S: Solution
On sunday I saw 3 people going into a forest with a dirt trail. I was wondering what they were doing Hmm I followed them. And I was like a ninja. It looked lIke they disappeared into the trees but they just went to the bench for lunch.I heard my stomach rumble. I was sooooooo hungry. So i tried to get some food without getting court but then he saw me. He said “do you want some food”
“I said” yes
“He” said help yourself.
“I” said thank you.
“He said” me his name his name was jerry and his son was Bob and his other son was called Jeff.
I tried not to laugh it was pretty funny he he he.
So I started to hang out with them a little and we saw a snake so we ran I went home to my family. And I don't know what they did. When I got home “I said” Finally far they were annoying.
Then i went to bed and woke up and realized it was all a dream. I went to go outside and they were there “Jerry” said hi
And i ran upstairs and looked down the stairs and he wasn't there and was hungry i must of been seeing things and he ate and dank and he felt better i just needed to eat then he saw him in the window dun dun dun.
Wednesday, 21 September 2016
MUSCLE FATIGUE
THIS WEEK WE ARE LEARNING ABOUT HOW TO BEAT AND HOW TO GET MUSCLE FATIGUE. PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT.
SPEACH
About five minutes ago Jack and his little brother Mark was fishing with there Dad. They went in a boat and when they started up the motor they heard the motor it sounded like a motorbike doing Donuts. After they started up the motor they had to get all the gear the fishing rods bait drinks food hats they felt really tired they fell asleep.
They were 2 miles out in the sea when they woke up but they were lost because they were asleep for 3 hours. But they had a compass so the new were to go the were out north but they realised they were in the perfect fishing spot.
But there was only one problem there was BIRDS!!! They were circling all the fish and diving in and out of the water eating all the fish And they did not know what to do there was only one thing to do throw stuff at them (says dad in a dark evil voice) they went in the Rubbish bin. And found an eaten apple core and THREW IT at the bird's dad threw the apple core and hit a bird's face with it dad was laughing ha ha ha then mark looked in the bin and found a broken phone and threw it and he hit the bird's wing .
“Dad,” Jack said. “Bulls eye!”
The bird squawked and fell down like a plane lost control and then jack looked in the bin and found a popped handball and threw it he hit the eye and the bird could not see properly the bird tried to dive down but then he couldn't see and hit his head on the corner of the boat it fell in the water.
After that there were exhausted so “Dad” said ahh finally peace and quiet.
“Jack” said let's fish now
“Mark” said YAY!!! This is my first time fishing.
Mark casted his rod and felt a tug. Mark tried to pull up his rod but he couldn't Mark asked jack for some help and tried to help him but he couldn't so jack asked dad for help.
But dad looked in the water and there was a shark “Dad and Jack” scream AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Dad farted mark laughs and asked what's a shark? Dad told jack to tell him what it was “Jack” said it is a big nice fish.
Dad looked at jack and “dad” said why you always lien.
then “dad” said it's a giant fish that has lots and lots of razor sharp teeth.
now mark was scared he got all the stuff out of the bin and hid in the bin then dad tried to drive away but the motor was jammed dad tries to see what jamed it it was a bird's beak.
So dad tried to take it out then he will get hurt so they fished for the shark and then he quickly pulled the rod and ripped out a tooth and use it to get out the beak and they drove away and that was a time they will never forget but there still one thing that's missing mark is still in the bin “jack” said you can come out now “mark” says is it gone
“Jack” said yes
Mark came out and dad gave mark the tooth of the shark “Mark” said cool is it the tooth of the one that nearly ate us
“Dad” said yes but keep it safe because when we get home i will make into a necklace jack was proud of mark for trying to fish. maybe next time they go fishing properly.
Tuesday, 20 September 2016
Monday, 19 September 2016
BUSH
T: Title
O: Orientation( when where who what why )
P: Problem
S: Solution
On sunday i saw 3 people going into a forest with a dirt trail i was wondering what they were doing Hmm i followed them. And i was like a ninja. It looked like they disappeared into the trees but they just went to the bench for lunch and i heard my stomach rumble i was sooooooo hungry. So i tried to get some without getting court but then he saw me. "He" said do you want some food
I said “yes”
"He" said help yourself
"I" said thank you.
He told me his name his name was jerry and his son was bob and his other son was called jeff. I tried not to laugh it was pretty funny he he he.
"He" said help yourself
"I" said thank you.
He told me his name his name was jerry and his son was bob and his other son was called jeff. I tried not to laugh it was pretty funny he he he.
So I started to hang out with them a little and we saw a snake so we ran I went home to my family. And I don't know what they did. When I got home.
"I said" Finally far they were annoying
Then i went to bed and woke up and realized it was all a dream i went to go outside and they were here "Jerry" said hi.
I ran upstairs and looked down the stairs and he wasn't there and was hungry i must of been seeing things. I ate and drank. And I felt better i just needed to eat then he saw him in the window.
dun dun dun.
Friday, 16 September 2016
Kaharau Olympic animation
Wednesday, 7 September 2016
T-SHIRT
THIS IS MY SPONSOR SHIP T-SHIRT WE HAD A CHART AND CHOOSE A SPONSOR AND I USED PUMA AND NIKE TELL ME IN THE COMMENT IF YOU LIKE MY SHIRT.
Fart ha ha ha
Friday, 2 September 2016
Thursday, 1 September 2016
narritive
About five minutes ago Jack and his little brother Mark was fishing with there Dad. They went in a boat and when they started up the motor they heard the motor it sounded like a motorbike doing Donuts. After they started up the motor they had to get all the gear the fishing rods bait drinks food hats they felt really tired they fell asleep.
They were 2 miles out in the sea when they woke up but they were lost because they were asleep for 3 hours. But they had a compass so the new were to go the were out north but they realised they were in the perfect fishing spot.
But there was only one problem there was BIRDS!!! They were circling all the fish and diving in and out of the water eating all the fish And they did not know what to do there was only one thing to do throw stuff at them (says dad in a dark evil voice) they went in the Rubbish bin. And found an eaten apple core and THREW IT at the bird's dad threw the apple core and hit a bird's face with it dad was laughing ha ha ha then mark looked in the bin and found a broken phone and threw it and he hit the bird's wing and dad and Jack said bulls eye the bird squawked and fell down like a plane lost control and then jack looked in the bin and found a popped handball and threw it he hit the eye and the bird could not see properly the bird tried to dive down but then he couldn't see and hit his head on the corner of the boat it fell in the water.
After that there were exhausted so Dad said ahh finally peace and quiet. Jack said let's fish now mark said YAY!!! This is my first time fishing. Mark casted his rod and felt a tug. Mark tried to pull up his rod but he couldn't he asked jack for some help and tried to help him but he couldn't so jack asked dad for help.
But dad looked in the water and there was a shark they scream AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Dad farted mark laughs and asked whats a shark? Dad told jack to tell him what it was Jack said it is a big nice fish. Dad looked at jack and said why you always lien then dad said it's a giant fish that has lots and lots of razor sharp teeth now mark was scared he got all the stuff out of the bin and hid in the bin then dad tried to drive away but the motor was jammed dad tries to see what jamed it it was a bird's beak.
So dad tried to take it out then he will get hurt so they fished for the shark and then he quickly pulled the rod and ripped out a tooth and use it to get out the beak and they drove away and that was a time they will never forget but there still one thing that's missing mark is still in the bin jack said you can come out now mark says is it gone he said yes he came out and dad gave mark the tooth of the shark he said cool is it the tooth of the one that nearly ate us dad said yes but keep it safe because when we get home i will make into a necklace jack was proud of mark for trying to fish maybe next time they go fishing.
Friday, 26 August 2016
ADVICE SPONSORSHIP
HI READER THIS WEEK WE NEEDED TO HELP THIS GUY CALLED DISC GUY WE NEEDED TO NAME HIM 2-3 SPONSORS IN THE OLYMPICS
Wednesday, 24 August 2016
kaharau Before the Games Post Card Activity
We need to imagine what it would be like if we where in rio and make up some examples about what we would do
compound sentence
- Germaine had some chocolate but it melted in his hands
2. Josh needed to go shopping but he had no money
3. Charles went to the arcade so i got some money out of my pocket'
THE BLACK WRITING IS MY WRITING AND THE GREEN IS THE WORDS THAT I PUT IN SO ITS A COMPOUND SENTENCE.
KAHARAU MASCOT
There is a mascot in the Olympics. A mascot is a costume that represents a team or country. It is supposed to give good luck to the team or country. Most mascots have 3 toes and 3 fingers. some are animals some are mixed they can be in heaps of different shapes.
But the one in the olympics has a green tail and a orange legs , a yellow body and a blue hands and yellow arms and a cat looking head
WE NEED TO DESCRIBE A OLYMPIC MASCOT.
Wednesday, 17 August 2016
Thursday, 11 August 2016
Wednesday, 10 August 2016
MASCOT
There is a mascot in the Olympics. A mascot is a costume that represents a team or country. It is supposed to give good luck to the team or country. Most mascots have 3 toes and 3 fingers. some are animals some are mixed they can be in heaps of different shapes.
THIS WEEK WE NEEDED TO DESCRIBE A MASCOT.
THIS WEEK WE NEEDED TO DESCRIBE A MASCOT.
Friday, 5 August 2016
Wednesday, 3 August 2016
Tuesday, 2 August 2016
THE OLYMPIC TORCH
In the Olympics there is a torch that has 5 layers of coloured squiggly lines that go from thicker to thinner. The 1st colour is green, the 2nd is turquoise, 3rd blue ,4th dark blue, and 5th is BLACK. The torch is silver like a new shiny new car. It is shaped like a cone with the flame on the very top.
Thursday, 7 July 2016
Wk2 dictogloss
Wham! the door slammed Behind me as I fall into the house. the whooshing of the wind can be heard through the walls. clink! clink! clink! the hail hits the window making my head spin if only i wasn't home alone. crash “hello?
is anyone there?” I call into the darkness. when all of a sudden, mum’s spotted cat comes tearing across the kitchen floor into my arms per per im glad someone is home to greet me.Tuesday, 5 July 2016
Awesome Art Gallery
YAY I woke up and said the art gallery in the hall at school is open I ran out the door of the car ran to the breeze and it wasn't open. So I was enjoying my day and then miss said 2 lines I was thinking were we were going. And then we went to the hall and we went to the art gallery and all of our school work was in the hall it was amazing. and this Is team 4 art work my work is in the folder on the table
Friday, 24 June 2016
PAUL MARTIN
did you know Paul Martin came to our school and taught us how to draw. He drew us a picture of a man running on the moon on the beach and on the tower. It looked amazing he gave the people that paid $15 for his book and they are lucky because they got there book given from the creator.
At the start it was interesting and stuff But it was cool at the end we all sang to him and we sang wairuatapu.
After that i was excited to show my family my drawing i done but i didn't finish and hope you enjoyed my writing.
Thursday, 23 June 2016
Tuesday, 21 June 2016
Friday, 17 June 2016
Wednesday, 15 June 2016
Comic animation
kaharau animation (1) from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
THIS IS MY ANIMATION AND BATMAN IS MY PERSON AND HE IS BEATING UP THE BAD GUY. Team 4 have been learning about comic art. We all had to make an animation and my one is about evil robots coming to our planet. Luckily Batman came and saved the day.
THIS IS MY ANIMATION AND BATMAN IS MY PERSON AND HE IS BEATING UP THE BAD GUY. Team 4 have been learning about comic art. We all had to make an animation and my one is about evil robots coming to our planet. Luckily Batman came and saved the day.
Friday, 10 June 2016
Thursday, 9 June 2016
WILL HE SAVE HER
Will He Save Her?Narrative Writing
WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!
You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?
Fill in the below table to help you plan.
Planning:
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Your Thoughts and Answers:
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Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
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ENDING
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Hero:
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WOLVERINE
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Villain:
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NO
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Other Characters (if any):
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A GUY
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Hook:
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HAVE YOU EVER JUMPED OFF A SKYTOWER BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T WANT TO USE THE STAIRS
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Problem:
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HE JUMPED OFF.
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Solution:
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WOLVERINE DIDN'T HELP HIM
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I’M A BLANK SPOT DON’T READ ME
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If beginning what could happen next
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If ending, what happened before this scene?
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HE JUMPED OFF A SKYTOWER BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T WANT TO USE THE STAIRS
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH help me. Wolverine runs as fast as he can scraping his claws on the floor. He is hanging off the sky tower and he is screaming like a girl ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he can't hold on anymore.
Wolverine is he going to save the day? Keep listening to see if he does he is falling wolverine is nervous oh no his claws pop out and he is trying to put the back in and then he got stabbed and went to hospital for 1 week but luckily he survived wolverine was training to control his claws for next time.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH help me. Wolverine runs as fast as he can scraping his claws on the floor again. He is hanging off the sky tower and he is screaming like a girl again ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he can't hold on anymore. Wolverine is he going to save the day? Keep listening to see if he does. he is falling wolverine is nervous again oh no his claws pop out and he is trying to put the back in and then he got them back in and saved the day. but the weird thing is it the same guy.
Friday, 3 June 2016
lyrical game
This term miss moala let us play a cool game called Orpheus we used it to learn our similes and our personification and our metaphors
If you want to play it here is the link click me to play
Thursday, 2 June 2016
Tuesday, 31 May 2016
Friday, 27 May 2016
dictagloss
Team leader America and the amazing Teacher Avengers are fighting a new super villain. The super villain is as strong as an ox, and as fast as a cheetah. He wears a deep purple cape and a sparkly green face mask to hide the hideous scar that covers more than half his face. He is a ninja warrior prowling around in the dark of night often leaving behind traces of his one and only weakness...empty K.F.C buckets.
this week we done a dictagloss and if you don't know what a dictagloss
this week we done a dictagloss and if you don't know what a dictagloss
Wednesday, 25 May 2016
Friday, 20 May 2016
Wednesday, 18 May 2016
Friday, 13 May 2016
my comic
this is a comic we had to do for ANZAC day and I hope you enjoy my work but it is kinda boring.
and ignore the Be sure to.
Thursday, 12 May 2016
Tuesday, 10 May 2016
immersion assembly
Ohhh its so boring when everyone is talking have you ever had an immersion assembly that got ruined from talking ? I have. it was awesome when the immersion assembly started and everybody stopped talking . YAY
Yay!!! It was finally starting mr jacobson was dressed up as a paint thingy can’t remember what it is called and mrs nua was a box with stuff on each side .
We saw all the other awesome videos like team two the season's team tree grand designs team five the waka race .
And then finally it was Team two!!! We had the best one ever well i think you know that right? Well back to the point we done comics art and stuff its awesome .
I feel really excited and i wanted to do a comic straight away but boring maths and reading is suddenly more better then a awesome comic .
Monday, 9 May 2016
kaharau dictogloss
Wham! the door slammed Behind me as I fall into the house. the whooshing of the wind can be heard through the walls. clink! clink! clink! the hail hits the window making my head spin if only i wasn't home alone. crash “hello?
is anyone there?” I call into the darkness. when all of a sudden, mum’s spotted cat comes tearing across the kitchen floor into my arms per per im glad someone is home to greet me.
a dictagloss is when a teacher or adalt reads a little story to you and you write it down to test your skills. term 2 week two on monday is when we done this.
Thursday, 14 April 2016
Monday, 11 April 2016
fiafia
FiaFia !!! yay
On thursday we had FiaFia !!! . I was in the hip hop it was awesome. Did you know fiafia is the best? and I was excited to perform and a kept on laughing and I couldn't stop it was to funny I was really nervous and I was shaking hard out but i was happy that I was at the back I was bored after that because we sa5t down for like 1 hours and 55 minutes. And after that I was a sleep. and I died.
Wednesday, 6 April 2016
Monday, 4 April 2016
camp blog comments
Today we had to respond to 5 people who had posted about there camp experience. I am giving credit to the People who let me read there camp writing. so those students are andrew jonathan josh charles and andrew again
Blog URL :
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Write 1-2 sentences (In your OWN words) about something you liked in their blog post.
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Write 1-2 sentences describing WHY you liked that part of their post.
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I really liked that Andrew enjoy making bread
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Because i like bread
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I really like the way you liked kayaking
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I love kayaking
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Joshs favorite part was playing in the hall.
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It was fun in the hall
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I really like the way you enjoyed playing in the hall
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It was fun in the hall
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I like hotel transylvania to
It was cool
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It was relaxing
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