Will He Save Her?Narrative Writing
WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!
You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?
Fill in the below table to help you plan.
Planning:
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Your Thoughts and Answers:
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Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
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ENDING
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Hero:
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WOLVERINE
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Villain:
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NO
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Other Characters (if any):
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A GUY
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Hook:
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HAVE YOU EVER JUMPED OFF A SKYTOWER BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T WANT TO USE THE STAIRS
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Problem:
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HE JUMPED OFF.
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Solution:
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WOLVERINE DIDN'T HELP HIM
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I’M A BLANK SPOT DON’T READ ME
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If beginning what could happen next
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If ending, what happened before this scene?
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HE JUMPED OFF A SKYTOWER BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T WANT TO USE THE STAIRS
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH help me. Wolverine runs as fast as he can scraping his claws on the floor. He is hanging off the sky tower and he is screaming like a girl ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he can't hold on anymore.
Wolverine is he going to save the day? Keep listening to see if he does he is falling wolverine is nervous oh no his claws pop out and he is trying to put the back in and then he got stabbed and went to hospital for 1 week but luckily he survived wolverine was training to control his claws for next time.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH help me. Wolverine runs as fast as he can scraping his claws on the floor again. He is hanging off the sky tower and he is screaming like a girl again ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he can't hold on anymore. Wolverine is he going to save the day? Keep listening to see if he does. he is falling wolverine is nervous again oh no his claws pop out and he is trying to put the back in and then he got them back in and saved the day. but the weird thing is it the same guy.
Kaharau, I really like that you included your prewriting on your post, but I am concerned that there are parts of it that you did not include in your story. For example, where is your hook in your writing? I would love to see you put forth more effort in your assignments.
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