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Wednesday 21 September 2016

SPEACH

About five minutes ago Jack and his little brother Mark was fishing with there Dad. They went in a boat and when they started up the motor they heard the motor it sounded like a motorbike doing Donuts. After they started up the motor they had to get all the gear the fishing rods bait drinks food hats they felt really tired they fell asleep.

They were 2 miles out in the sea when they woke up but they were lost because they were asleep for 3 hours. But they had a compass so the new were to go the were out north but they realised they were in the perfect fishing spot.

But there was only one problem there was BIRDS!!! They were circling all the fish and diving in and out of the water eating all the fish And they did not know what to do there was only one thing to do throw stuff at them (says dad  in a dark evil voice) they went in the Rubbish bin. And found an eaten apple core and THREW IT at the bird's dad threw the apple core and hit a bird's face with it dad was laughing ha ha ha then mark looked in the bin and  found a broken phone and threw it and he hit the bird's wing .

“Dad,” Jack said. “Bulls eye!”

The bird squawked and fell down like a plane lost control and then jack looked in the bin and found a popped handball and threw it he hit the eye and the bird could not see properly the bird tried to dive down but then he couldn't see and hit his head on the corner of the boat it fell in the water.

After that there were exhausted so “Dad” said ahh finally peace and quiet.
“Jack” said let's fish now

“Mark” said YAY!!! This is my first time fishing.

Mark casted his rod and felt a tug. Mark tried to pull up his rod but he couldn't Mark asked jack for some help and tried to help him but he couldn't so jack asked dad for help.

But dad looked in the water and there was a shark “Dad and Jack” scream AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Dad farted mark laughs and asked what's a shark? Dad told jack to tell him what it was “Jack” said it is a big nice fish.

Dad looked at jack and “dad” said why you always lien.
then “dad” said it's a giant fish that has lots and lots of razor sharp teeth.

now mark was scared he got all the stuff out of the bin and hid in the bin then dad tried to drive away but the motor was jammed dad tries to see what jamed it it was a bird's beak.

So dad tried to take it out then he will get hurt so they fished for the shark and then he quickly pulled the rod and ripped out a tooth and use it to get out the beak and they drove away and that was a time they will never forget but there still one thing that's missing mark is still in the bin “jack” said you can come out now “mark” says is it gone

“Jack” said yes

Mark came out and dad gave mark the tooth of the shark “Mark” said cool is it the tooth of the one that nearly ate us

“Dad” said yes but keep it safe because when we get home i will make into a necklace jack was proud of mark for trying to fish. maybe next time they go fishing properly.

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