Combining Sentences

Expanding

 WALT: to expand simple (kernel) sentences

How People Should Be Treated

How People Should Be Treated

You know i think people should be treated the same as everyone because people are getting bullied and picked on treat people the same way you treat your family and friends so don’t bully people and treat people in a good way and it will make them happy and if it does not

New

OLD writing

A special play

This is a place that is special to me it’s called School it’s cool now i’m a senior a Pt England school it’s fun. My name is kaharau and the reason why school is special to me is because if you don’t go to school you might be dumb. And might not get a job so that is why school is special so without school you won’t learn new stuff like how to spell,do maths,read… and that will suck. So if you go to school you might enjoy life a bit more.

When you finish school you will move on to intermediate and that is when you wish you still were in school so if you don’t like school than you won't like intermediate thats when you learn tech.graphics and calving. It’s awesome and creative but hardish it’s frustrating sometimes.

And when you finish intermediate then you go to the one the only COLLEGE!!! I’m not at college but the work you need to do there looks so hard. And long and boring but sometimes it’s fun not really. The only reason I know all this is because my brother goes to college. He said it’s hard and annoying  but i don’t mind i’m a year 7 so i will worry next year in 2018 but i need to finish intermediate to be ready.

New writing

MY new special place is…

There is one place that is really special to me it’s called home I like it at home because I get to relax and play on the Xbox 360 and i get to eat and it’s awesome and we are moving out and getting a new house this year.

Work

Poster of Scott Curry

kaharau Before the Games Post Card Activity

We need to imagine what it would be like if we where in rio and make up some examples about what we would do

compound sentence

1. Germaine had some chocolate but it melted in his hands

2.  Josh needed to go shopping but he had no money

3. Charles went to the arcade so i got some money out of my pocket'


THE BLACK WRITING IS MY WRITING AND THE GREEN IS THE WORDS THAT I PUT IN SO ITS A COMPOUND SENTENCE.

THE OLYMPIC TORCH

In the Olympics there is a torch that has 5 layers of coloured squiggly lines that go from thicker to thinner. The 1st colour is green, the 2nd is turquoise, 3rd blue ,4th dark blue, and 5th is BLACK.  The torch is silver like a new shiny new car.  It is shaped like a cone with the flame on the very top.

lyrical game

This term miss moala let us play a cool game called Orpheus we used it to learn our similes and our personification and our metaphors

If you want to play it here is the link click me to play

my comic

this is a comic we had to do for ANZAC day and I hope you enjoy my work but it is kinda boring.
and ignore the Be sure to.

letter to ted work

immersion assembly

Ohhh its so boring when everyone is talking have you ever had an immersion assembly that got ruined from talking ? I have. it was awesome when the immersion assembly started and everybody stopped talking . YAY

Yay!!! It was finally starting mr  jacobson was dressed up as a paint thingy can’t remember what it is called and mrs nua was a box with stuff on each side .

We saw all the other awesome videos like team two the season's team tree grand designs team five the waka race .

And then finally it was Team two!!! We had the best one ever well i think you know that right? Well back to the point we done comics art and stuff its awesome .

I feel really excited and i wanted to do a comic straight away but boring maths and reading is suddenly more better then a awesome comic .

fiafia

           FiaFia !!! yay

On thursday we had FiaFia !!! . I was in  the hip hop it was awesome.  Did you know fiafia is the best? and I was excited to perform and a kept on laughing and I couldn't stop it was to funny I was really nervous and I was shaking hard out but i was happy that I was at the back I was bored after that because we sa5t down for like 1 hours and 55 minutes. And after that I was a sleep. and I died.

group name

camp blog comments

Today we had to respond to 5 people who had posted about there camp experience. I am giving credit to the People who let me read there camp writing. so those students are andrew jonathan josh charles and andrew again

Blog URL :	Write 1-2 sentences (In your OWN words) about something you liked in their blog post.	Write 1-2 sentences describing WHY you liked that part of their post.
my post on andrew blog	I really liked that Andrew enjoy making bread	Because i like bread
my post on Jonathan blog	I really like the way you liked kayaking	I love kayaking
my post on josh blog	Joshs favorite part was playing in the hall.	It was fun in the hall
my post on charles	I really like the way you enjoyed playing in the hall	It was fun in the hall
my 2nd post on andrew blog	I like hotel transylvania to It was cool	It was relaxing

hooked camp work practice

2 volcano naritive

the thing I used was sound affect's

Crack,

Boom,

Bkkkk!

The ground is shaking but no one knows because it is far away and everyone is asleep

in Africa. There were two volcanos and the best part is the volcanos erupted and everybody died. But all of the people from the other country that did not die helped stop the eruption. And saved the whole of Africa and everyone lived happily ever after except everyone that died. the way they stopped the eruption was they just waited for it to stop. He he he

my hook practice

iron tamariki