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Thursday 7 May 2015

Nepal eathquake

There was a powerful earthquake struck the country.
people were expecting bigger aftershocks.
thousands of people were stuck and needed to be rescued.
people were searching for survivors in the rubble.
people were getting sick because the outbreak of disease.

1 comment:

  1. Good effort Kaharau. Remember that paragraphs are not written like a poem. Each sentence needs to follow on from the first.

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